3-12
A very aggressive entry from my girl CJ, who now FINALLY gets her own intro! I have also removed a lot of the garbage character design stuff she used to have and I appreciate her so much more now.
Though I don’t endorse throwing stuff to get attention, I also know for some people it is the only way to get their attention at all, so use your throwing arm respectfully I guess?????? ????? ???????
I’d just glare from the back of the room intensely until someone notices me (don’t notice me)
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↓ Transcript
Ash's thoughts open the page as he reaches for one of the packet donuts.
"it's hard to know how well I'm doing here... We haven't seen or heard from our manager in a good few months."
Ash grabs a donut, as does Darrell, and they prepare to take a bite.
Ash: We can't sell 'em without having a taste test, right?
Darrell: Exactly!
An explosive shout comes from the other end of the counters, off panel.
"Hey! Yeah, you two!"
A woman, appearing the same age range around as the other two (she is 18) enter from a side door and stands in frustration before them. He brown hair has darkened lowlights at the tips of her heavy frindge leading into a bob cut that they fans out stylishly at the base of her hair line. Plum eye shadow and thick dark brown lipstick matched with black painted nails, lace collar and plug earrings accentuate her stand out demeaner.
In a swift motion, so grabs a lump of cheese and throws it at Darrell, spooking him into dropping his donut. She snarls, exclaiming:
"Both of ya didn't think of askin' me now if I'd want any!"
Darrell addresses her in burst of controlled anger as Ash watches from aside, still holding his donut.
Darrell: NO NEED TO CHUCK STUFF AT ME THOUGH!
The woman is introduced as Charlotte Jamieson, though she is to be known as CJ, of the evening shift crew. She smirks and glares cheeckily at Darrell, who is now not impressed.
CJ: Got your attention didn't it?
Ash takes a tentative bite from his donut and thinks to himself.
"But if nothing has been said then I must being fine! Right?"
"it's hard to know how well I'm doing here... We haven't seen or heard from our manager in a good few months."
Ash grabs a donut, as does Darrell, and they prepare to take a bite.
Ash: We can't sell 'em without having a taste test, right?
Darrell: Exactly!
An explosive shout comes from the other end of the counters, off panel.
"Hey! Yeah, you two!"
A woman, appearing the same age range around as the other two (she is 18) enter from a side door and stands in frustration before them. He brown hair has darkened lowlights at the tips of her heavy frindge leading into a bob cut that they fans out stylishly at the base of her hair line. Plum eye shadow and thick dark brown lipstick matched with black painted nails, lace collar and plug earrings accentuate her stand out demeaner.
In a swift motion, so grabs a lump of cheese and throws it at Darrell, spooking him into dropping his donut. She snarls, exclaiming:
"Both of ya didn't think of askin' me now if I'd want any!"
Darrell addresses her in burst of controlled anger as Ash watches from aside, still holding his donut.
Darrell: NO NEED TO CHUCK STUFF AT ME THOUGH!
The woman is introduced as Charlotte Jamieson, though she is to be known as CJ, of the evening shift crew. She smirks and glares cheeckily at Darrell, who is now not impressed.
CJ: Got your attention didn't it?
Ash takes a tentative bite from his donut and thinks to himself.
"But if nothing has been said then I must being fine! Right?"